First full band hardcore mix, with vocals

[emerica167852]

So this is the first track from my bands demo EP that i recorded.
I know a lot of you will shoot yourself when you hear our crabness. But please all opinions aside im just looking for some advice on the mix and master.

Drums were all mic'ed up and replaced with various samples

Bass is podfarm SVT model

Guitar is podfarm Dualrec and orange model

Keys were just recorded straight in

Clean vocs where with my crap MXL condenser and screams were with my sm57


Any other production questions just ask
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5825762/Smokey%20MSTR.wma







Thanks so much

 

[Matt.CL]

get a pop filter for your sm57, and i would remove the reverb from screamed vocals

 

[XnaySaturo]

There's basically no low end. It's all pretty harsh. De-esser on those cleans vocals for sure. Too loud for it's own good.

I'm guessing your problem is all in the pseudo-mastering, because it would sound perfectly fine otherwise.