First full project

[Pinebox]

Can someone please critique the shit out of this, I need some help. I'm not totally done with the mix but I would like some outside perspectives. Thank you.


http://dl.dropbox.com/u/32985637/Test 8.mp3

 

[Pinebox]

Bump.

Someone rip this apart please, I kinda sat on it for a while and now my ears are stagnant.

Couple things I plan to do when I get a second:

-Remove some lower mids ~150
-Carve more space for the leads
-Lower ~60

 

[AeternusEternus]

remove the low mids from the kick, dramatically and exclusively, and this will sound dandy

edit: those clean vocals especially need to be compressed straight to hell. the volume ducks in and out with his distance from the mic.

 

[Pinebox]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/32985637/Test 1.mp3


Made some revisions. As always, anything helps.