First posted mix

[keepingpacestudios]

the song from NSguitar
tell me what is wrong with my mix
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/44565758/endeavorsmix2.mp3
i like how it turned out but i mixed it on headphones and in the box
thoughts?

 

[keepingpacestudios]

nothing?

 

[oroinvictus]

Sounds pretty good to me, although the bass guitar sounds like it could be louder and more present, and the drums sound a bit squashed and tend to get buried under everything else.