Orchestral black metal riff (mix) - advice/thoughts?

[JamieK]

Hey,
Just want to know your thoughts about this sample mix.
It's an orchestral black metal thing style riff.
There's a little orchestral intro that leads on from another part in the song so ignore the first part,
I just want advice/thoughts on it please (especially the clean guitars at the end, cus this is the first time iv'e mixed cleans)

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1466847/Mix%20Practice%20-%20Div%20Int%20-%20Final%201.mp3

SD 2.0 and Warp VST used, mixed in pro tools le.

Oh, it comes in quite loud after the orchestral bit!

Cheers guys

 

[Brender500]

I am listening on headphones but it sounds great.everything seems like it is siting real well and the cleans sound great

 

[ratsapprentice]

Sounds great, but the attack/click on the kicks is a little irritating.

 

[JamieK]

Cheers guys, what do you mean by irritating?

 

[ratsapprentice]

It's hard to explain any more than that, sorry.
I guess it could be a little less hard/clicky and still be audible through the rest of the mix..... at the moment it's a little abrasive.
Hope that helps.

 

[JamieK]

Ah ok, cheers dude