Dear Daryl Peoples
My name is Michael Cody I wish to apply for the Part time senior salesperson position at Warehouse Sales as advertised in the Courier on Saturday the 12th.
I beleive that I would be a valuable asset to the company. I find providing good customer service to be very satisfying. I am punctual, motivated, enthusiastic, and I am able to work flexible hours at any time.
I have studied the Bachelor of Engineering/Bachelor of Computing at the University of Ballarat for two years, but I have deferred the course because I am considering a different career and needed a change in direction. I completed my VCE at Sebastopol Secondary College and gained my Certificate III of Information Technology as a VET study. I was involved in many school activities such as the International Student Project, enrichment classes and Student Exchange Programs.
I also took part in a one week work placement at B&D Technologies. My duties included assembly of PCs, software installation, fault analysis and customer service.
I have had previous employment with McDonalds, Sturt St., for 12 months, where I gained valuable experience in customer relations and teamwork and also at Pizza Hut for 8 months where these skills were further improved upon. My recent employment with Bilo allowed me to gain skills in stock handling and ordering, and gave me experience in being in charge of a department. And once again, customer service was a very important part of my job at Bilo.
Additional details of my credentials are outlined in the accompanying resume.
The above position offers a new challenge in field which interests me greatly. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you at your earliest convenience and discuss my qualifications. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application.
Yours faithfully
____________________________
(Michael Cody)
Is there anything I can improve on here?
My name is Michael Cody I wish to apply for the Part time senior salesperson position at Warehouse Sales as advertised in the Courier on Saturday the 12th.
I beleive that I would be a valuable asset to the company. I find providing good customer service to be very satisfying. I am punctual, motivated, enthusiastic, and I am able to work flexible hours at any time.
I have studied the Bachelor of Engineering/Bachelor of Computing at the University of Ballarat for two years, but I have deferred the course because I am considering a different career and needed a change in direction. I completed my VCE at Sebastopol Secondary College and gained my Certificate III of Information Technology as a VET study. I was involved in many school activities such as the International Student Project, enrichment classes and Student Exchange Programs.
I also took part in a one week work placement at B&D Technologies. My duties included assembly of PCs, software installation, fault analysis and customer service.
I have had previous employment with McDonalds, Sturt St., for 12 months, where I gained valuable experience in customer relations and teamwork and also at Pizza Hut for 8 months where these skills were further improved upon. My recent employment with Bilo allowed me to gain skills in stock handling and ordering, and gave me experience in being in charge of a department. And once again, customer service was a very important part of my job at Bilo.
Additional details of my credentials are outlined in the accompanying resume.
The above position offers a new challenge in field which interests me greatly. I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you at your earliest convenience and discuss my qualifications. Thank you for taking the time to consider my application.
Yours faithfully
____________________________
(Michael Cody)
Is there anything I can improve on here?