Artisticly speaking: I think its great,
but some few touches should be removed from the picture in order for it to be perfect and with a more "clean" look.
when I say "Clean" I dont mean the dirty dishes on the table...
the napkins on the table IMO should be deleted, so the table would have more contrast with the background.
I also think that the empty creamer on the far end of the table should be removed for a contonious line of the sofa... Not sure about the cup behind the ketchup bottle... but overall: good piece.
YUM. now I'm hungry.