Full mix test, brutal death metal

[ParsonsMatt]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1161830/Forgiveness test.mp3

Here's a new song I'm working on. Vocals and guitar playing are a bit rough, but I'll go back in and fix the timing issues when it gets closer to recording the CD.

What do you guys think? Comments on the mix/writing appreciated!

Guitars:
ESP Horizon NT-II, DiMarzio Evolution, 11-56 gauge strings in B standard (floppy and awful, need 13-68!!)One take per side, with TSE X30/LeXTAC track layers on both sides.

Bass:
Warwick Rockbass Corvette-5 string. One take, two layers. One for grit/cut and one for bass.

Drums:
Superior 2.0 + Steven Slate

Vocals:
Shure SM7b + compression/EQ/reverb

 

[zvish]

sounds like you have strings to low or something

 

[ParsonsMatt]

Thanks gents!

 

[XnaySaturo]

Snare could use a bit more high end, and vocals a bit more presence. I think the drums could use a bit more ambience, they sound more upfront compared to the rest. All suggestions only, I'm not entirely certain of what I'm saying :Smokin:

Song's br00tal!