GOJIRA style song, where should i go with it?

[nevchrist]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5831187/riff idea 2.wav

I've been writing this today, pretty excited because it's been years since I've been able to sit down and record anything new. How do you guys feel about it so far and anyone got any suggestions as to where I should go with it?

 

[f3r0m0n]

really sounds like gojira rip off, I would bring some your own ideas in there and the song would improve 100%

 

[LeSedna]

Exactly what I thought yesterday (I thought I had answered but i see it's not the case).

It's okay but it's too gojira-like. You should keep the ideas but make it more personnal, I guess.

 

[nevchrist]

i agree with you. ahhrgh i'm getting so sick of this creative block.