hatebreeder try

well ... maybe i forgot to say:
you can also tell me your opinions and what i coudda have done better ;)
 
We can hardly hear you with the song playing so loud in the background but the rhythm sounds ok.
You still need to get that lead part before the verse and the sweeps during the verse bit much better. And then the classical sounding bit near the end and the solos. Mainly the leads but it sounds like you need to familarize yourself with playing it more.
 
^ thx for your answer... i can play the classical part though.. was just bad luck at the recording.
and i agree with you about the sweeps and the leads... yeah i'll practize and rerecord it and sorry, i didnt think the music was too loud.

rawk on!
 
It's alright but like most of your videos you need to work on the leads, rhythm is good though.
Also i would like to see you do one then practise more then play it again so we can see the difference, because it seems as if you do one get the comments on how to improve then get bored and do a different song, we never get to hear the improved version.
 
Do you not have a recording program that you can use?

It'd be much easier and you can do as many takes on the hard parts as you want so it's basically up to you if you mess up if you know what I mean. You could mess up baaad, but if you deleted that take, practised it and got it good, layed it down and saved it, not a single soul would know.
 
yah well i'm worlds too lazy to make "takes"... and it's like playing it life.. ya know? it's what you can and not like studio
and i just use windows movie maker which is standardly on my window$ ;)
 
heey that was good. o wee this is my firts post =P .. didn't know what to comment soo .. =D =D . how long you been playing ? i've been thinkin to buy a jackson or something .. but just dunno wich one XDXD o yea hope you don't mind , offtopic .. but you're cute =P =P
 
daaamn those guitars look good. but i was thinking something less expensive you know ;) just so i can get started . and i think you should be proud if you haven't
played for a very long time ! honestly i think your doing a good job just need to practise , hehe and so do i XD
 
man that was awsome, i gotta start playin guitar again (learn).
things like that encourage me to start learning again lol.