Help me wit this mix?

[setyouranchor]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7188427/VacantPreMasterMix1clip.mp3

I've only included a small clip for now

Am I on the right tracks?

I'm struggling with the bass a fair bit : / This is the first time I've really tried mixing with lots of headroom

There is also nothing on my master bus right now

 

[setyouranchor]

Anyone?

 

[poisoned dreams]

i like it, the guitars sound mean and raw the drums remind me of the devil wears prada

 

[mlopez27]

So far I liked what I've heard. I like the way the bass is blending so good with kick.
Make it tighter.

 

[barricade]

less snare more kick i'd say!

 

[setyouranchor]

Thanks very much guys

I still need to finish off editing guitars and bass. Also, still finding it hard to nail that lead sound. I have the tone I want but it doesn't sit well with the other guitars!

I'm glad the feedback hasn't been too bad! So glad the guitars got complimented

Any other feedback and tips on getting that lead to sit a little better?

 

[setyouranchor]

Bumpppp

 

[kalhas]

Hi,

The link is not working!

 

[setyouranchor]

Edited with working link!

 

[setyouranchor]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7188427/Output 1-2.mp3

Full song, few lead bits not in there but its a work in progress

LET ME KNOW WHAT YOU THINK FELLARS!

 

[setyouranchor]

Bumpidy

 

[setyouranchor]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7188427/VacantMIX1.mp3

Last bump I promise!

Added some more verb to the snare, turned it down a little and the kick came out a notch.
Also tried my luck with mastering!