i do agree, it needs a bit more bass. The vocals sound a little high in the mix, but then again, i'm listening on earbuds, so it could be that. and, is the snare panned to the left any? sounds like it. overal, not bad. specially for your first time recording vocals. nice and clear.
yeah the snare is panned left a little. And I updated the dropbox file. it definitely was lacking a lot of bass I must of had it muted or something when I uploaded that.