help save my mix! Critic me (haunted shores type chords)

[snerklepod]

So i've had this idea of a song stuck in my head for quite a while, and i finally got around to tracking it the other day several times as i couldnt quite pick a guitar tone suitable. Im having a lot of trouble mixing this so please help me out thanks. heres a section of my song
https://soundcloud.com/tsukihime/f

 

[snerklepod]

is this that bad.............

 

[harls]

Cool riffs, man. Your tone has potential but it sounds a bit too dominant in the mids, making it sound too airy. Experiment with cutting between 400Hz and 1200Hz, as this should help free some more space for the drums. The drums sound a bit flat and lifeless and in need of some sparkle, so experiment with parallel comping for beef and EQ+reverb to make things more 'present'.

 

[snerklepod]

Hey man i wanna thank you, that advice helped me a lot. Heres an updated mix https://soundcloud.com/tsukihime/updated-mix any other advice is much appreciated!