How does this sound?! Need some ears, please =).

[tr3nt]

Hey dudes, alright here I got a Chorus of one of our songs, I just read a bunch of stuff and applied it to this. I was wondering what you guys thought.

link is here; http://files.getdropbox.com/u/1371004/wurd.mp3

I used EZdrummer, a Mackie Onyx Satellite, guitar and amp were Gibson SG stndrd/Mesa Boogie Roadster.

I'm looking for criticism so I can get better! Thanks & Godbless.

 

[Uncle Junior]

Sounds like a very short song, like you hear in the end of a commercial.

...about the sound, it's okay for it's style...maybe some more work on the guitars.

 

[tr3nt]

Could you elaborate? I want to get better from it . Thanks for the response!

 

[Uncle Junior]

Dude I think a bit more louder kick and more high end on the guitars...I hate EZ drummer, try BFD2 with Andy Johns Classic Drums Platinum Samples....but if you stay with EZ just make'em a bit more alive...

 

[CatharsisStudios]

http://catharsis.supremepixels.com/fastestmixever.mp3





;x

 

[tr3nt]

Don't embarrass me Ryan haha.

 

[tr3nt]

https://files.getdropbox.com/u/1371004/thursmaster.wav

I tried again.

 

[sedit1]

Now the vocals are very buried in the mix.
All the other instruments are blocking eatch other. Maybe you should try some eq on the guitars, maybe a bit scooping mids to make some room to the vocals. The bass is too loud and the low end is huge. After you get thes in balance you could compress the vocals and add some nice plate reverb and littlebit delay.

But the main problem is the low end what is blocking things

-Matias