I tried to make first heavy metal homerecording!

[Hodu]

Hi I am Hodu from south Korea.

I composed a song via bias fx2

Would u please give me any feedback?

 

[DMH_Productions]

im no expert but i do record my band and i think this is good ! i would high pass a bit on the floor tom and eq a bit of the boomy freqs out on it and bring the kick up because to my through my monitors i loose the kick and also sidechain a comp to the bass with the trigger set as the kick and that will help both out so you can really drive the low end