If Black Dahlia Murder and Dimmu Borgir had offspring

[SirLucasTheGreat]

Tell what you think of what is going on so far. There are no keys in here yet but the last riff I was imagining lasting for twice as long as it does except on that last half (the part that would be added) the guitars, bass, and drums would fade out and a piano, cello, and violin synth would swell in doing pretty much the same musically as what the guitars and bass were doing although the piano would be improvising....

http://www.zshare.net/audio/557504296e956c69/

Guitars - Line 6 POD XT (metal shop expansion)
Bass- Line 6 POD Xt (bass expansion)
Drums - Superior 2.0

Pardon my sloppy playing. Half of these riffs I wrote today and am still getting used to the structure of the song.

 

[eternally_gutted]

good composition man, i like black dahlia murder and my opinion is this is really good. i like 1.49 part a lot, i´ll add orchestral strings there.

 

[SirLucasTheGreat]

Thanks a lot man I appreciate it. Again sorry for very sloppy playing but I was trying to get some of the ideas and structure out.

 

[eternally_gutted]

your idea is very good. please, add strings in those parts.it would be awesome sure.

 

[SirLucasTheGreat]

Word I will get that going soon. Do any of you guys think the guitars are a little harsh or would I be sacrificing clarity trying to treat that?

 

[SirLucasTheGreat]

I own an Engl Powerball with a Mesa Recto (V30s) cab. What hardware would I need to get that tone into this mix or should I stay with the Podxt for convenience?