lyrics you wrote

Lunatic - Actually that's the only one I've written... I'm working on a couple more atm though... my band might use them for some songs we're working on.

BTW, I actually don't like Darkthrone, just their album titles ;) Love Drudkh though.

I'll post my other stuff when I finish em :)
 
sonofhendrix13 said:
I think 90% of metal lyrics suck. Half the bands today just write about death and killing constantly with no attempt at originality. Its quite funny actually.
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HELL What about blind guardian, gamma ray or the speed kings dragonforce
Dont dis power metal
 
WNxScythe said:
The crimson Orb doth shine on its upward path
Manifold dying shear Tongues chase an arclite-shaft
A Blazon’d in the Northern sky for aught to see
Aye, but tis Naught nor but silt next to thee

Autumn’s Aurora ‘shrines its last wretchèd loom
The singèd eyes of the Beholden do consume
Bloodred corpses have painted what ere were green
But match’d with thine Eyes, immortal beauty be but fiend

The steeliee rapiers of nature’s torpor foal
Shrieking ghoul winds part the morbod whole
Staggered Ancients guard the secreted swoon
Silent lids watching below my Funeral Moon.

---yes I stole some album titles ;) It's supposed to be about seasonal change/love poem.
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Like it alot. I think you shoul make about another five verses and make it an epic tho!
 
hey this is one of my song i trust that people know there is alot of work in this
PLS DONT STILL IT

alone in this wonderful world

in the valley of life i was walking
the brigth ligth was sining
it was so butiful and amazing
wolf howling and bird signing
but some thing was missing
or was it

it was then that i realised
that i was no loger
in the same century
i was in a must better life
and i was alone in this world

why did we destroy this planet
why are we so evil
do we need to travel
why cant we just see
that this world is not lost
yet

i just wanted to see
i just wanted to haer
what we were going to be
what happen beten all those year
this will be a mistery
the only thing i know
the human was destroyed
how i dont know
why i think that we all know


there still time my friend
let unite and stop this pain
because the human time will end
and every thing else will remaine


tell me what you guys think
thx
 
WNxScythe said:
The crimson Orb doth shine on its upward path
Manifold dying shear Tongues chase an arclite-shaft
A Blazon’d in the Northern sky for aught to see
Aye, but tis Naught nor but silt next to thee

Autumn’s Aurora ‘shrines its last wretchèd loom
The singèd eyes of the Beholden do consume
Bloodred corpses have painted what ere were green
But match’d with thine Eyes, immortal beauty be but fiend

The steeliee rapiers of nature’s torpor foal
Shrieking ghoul winds part the morbod whole
Staggered Ancients guard the secreted swoon
Silent lids watching below my Funeral Moon.

---yes I stole some album titles ;) It's supposed to be about seasonal change/love poem.
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Thats pretty damn cool man!!!
 
MASTER OF GORE
PAIN
screaming in pain bleeding to death
MURDER
become one with the dead pulverised and drowning in blood

BOW! down to the master of gore
BOW!or...DIE!
BOW! down to the master of gore
NOW!...your fucked up and ready to die


TORCHER
bruised dismembered and disfigured
DECAY
left to die and slowing decaying

BOW! down to the master of gore
BOW!or...DIE!
BOW! down to the master of gore
NOW!...your fucked up and ready to die
------------------------------------------


yes i know its pretty cheesy
 
stabed bruised beaten like a bitch
raped severed ready to burn
burn to ashes go up in flames
die

into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium with you

lifted out of the pool of fire and lava
vocal chords burned and brain is frying just waiting to shut down
eyes melted and you fall down to the floor and you chrush yourself to chunks of black ash
die

into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium with you
 
Stab a knife in my throat so i can't sing this song about you. Stab a knife in your throat so i can't hear you speak my name.

Used that in a break down my band did...it was tuff
 
ProjectedBlack said:
Can anybody post impressions on the lyrics I posted?
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Yeh man, i like those lyrics, i think they are pretty cool. The first one, I think it was, I liked the best, sort of takes you on a journey; its not just mindless lyrics. :rock:
 
i had enough with you you stupid cocksucker
you have crossed me for the last time
ill make the remaining years of your life a living hell
ill take your children and butcher them to bits
ill sodomize your wife and burn her with a match
then ill force you to watch it all unfold

your traumatized
cant beleive your eyes
you pray to your god
that its just a dream
your damaged for life

you havent suffered enogh
now your on your on your knees
praying for mercy
i chop off your arms and legs and now your nothing but a stump
you beg to die cause you have nothing to live for


your traumatized
cant beleive your eyes
you pray to your god
that its just a dream
your damaged for life
 
you have been thrown in to the pool of acid. your skin melts and your insides are boiling. you scream but that will do you no good. your blood and melted skin floats to the top of the pool and your burning disfigured copse sinks to the bottom of the pool. when your corpse hits the bottom you break into pieces. your bones are turning to black ash. your insides melt. and your are nothing but ashes liquid and burning meat.
 
Consuming Impulse said:
you have been thrown in to the pool of acid. your skin melts and your insides are boiling. you scream but that will do you no good. your blood and melted skin floats to the top of the pool and your burning disfigured copse sinks to the bottom of the pool. when your corpse hits the bottom you break into pieces. your bones are turning to black ash. your insides melt. and your are nothing but ashes liquid and burning meat.
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YUM!:Puke: :rock:
 
Which of these lyrics are the best?

Pool of Scorching Acid
-----------
you have been thrown in to the pool of acid. your skin melts and your insides are boiling. you scream but that will do you no good. your blood and melted skin floats to the top of the pool and your burning disfigured copse sinks to the bottom of the pool. when your corpse hits the bottom you break into pieces. your bones are turning to black ash. your insides melt. and your are nothing but ashes liquid and burning meat.
--------------
Traumatized
--------------------
i had enough with you you stupid cocksucker
you have crossed me for the last time
ill make the remaining years of your life a living hell
ill take your children and butcher them to bits
ill sodomize your wife and burn her with a match
then ill force you to watch it all unfold

your traumatized
cant beleive your eyes
you pray to your god
that its just a dream
your damaged for life

you havent suffered enogh
now your on your on your knees
praying for mercy
i chop off your arms and legs and now your nothing but a stump
you beg to die cause you have nothing to live for


your traumatized
cant beleive your eyes
you pray to your god
that its just a dream
your damaged for life
------------------------
Master of Gore
--
PAIN
screaming in pain bleeding to death
MURDER
become one with the dead pulverised and drowning in blood

BOW! down to the master of gore
BOW!or...DIE!
BOW! down to the master of gore
NOW!...your fucked up and ready to die


TORCHER
bruised dismembered and disfigured
DECAY
left to die and slowing decaying

BOW! down to the master of gore
BOW!or...DIE!
BOW! down to the master of gore
NOW!...your fucked up and ready to die
------------------------------------------
Into the Crematorium
---
stabed bruised beaten like a bitch
raped severed ready to burn
burn to ashes go up in flames
die

into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium with you

lifted out of the pool of fire and lava
vocal chords burned and brain is frying just waiting to shut down
eyes melted and you fall down to the floor and you chrush yourself to chunks of black ash
die

into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium
into the crematorium with you
-----------------------------
 
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