Major-core!! (Happy Screamo?) Mix check it out

[Joel4662]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13836295/Rhino 4.mp3

Written entirely in a major key

lemme know what you think please!!

 

[AllanD]

It's played really sloppy, needs to be tightened up! The guitar sound is a bit boxy, work on the mids.

 

[Joel4662]

Thanks I boosted 2-4k to make the mix flatter so I'll mess with that some

And yeah I've gone through like 6 takes on each part, spliced and slipped the best takes but can't get much out of my source haha

More practice I suppose will help the tightness issue
Thanks for the help man!

 

[AllanD]

No problem. Try the cutting lower mids, like 400-1k. It sounds like a lot of honk, if you know what I mean.

 

[Joel4662]

Yeah I scooped like 500-1000 just now and it sounds alot tighter
And it brings out my vocal tracks alot more!
Thanks anyone hear anything else??