OK, let me preface this with: I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR MARCH HARE MATERIAL TO LISTEN TO FOR MONTHS, SPECIFICALLY A MORE FINISHED VERSION OF THIS SONG! THANK YOU AND KEEP IT COMING!
That said: yeah, the snare's a bit weak. The previous mix clip you posted for "Sand On Fire" was AMAZING... I still use that as the reference when I'm mixing that kind of music. Everything sounds perfect. If you could nail that sound again here, I couldn't think of anything to criticize. The guitars, drums, bass, overall balance... everything is fantastic in that mix. Back to the snare; it lacks body here as others have said, but I think you may have boosted the high end snap a bit much too. It kind of sticks out above the mix. But it's definitely good to hear it with Jake's vocal. Something I'd like to hear (more of a production idea than a mix idea, so feel free to tell me to fuck right off) would be a filter or other effect of some kind on the vocal in the first half of the verse, maybe similar to what's on the backing vocals in the chorus. I could be way off, though.