Melodic Hardcore mix, need advices

[Sim.T]

Hello,

I've been working on this stuff today and I'd be glad to have your opinion on it.
I think something is weird in this mix but I can't really put my finger on it, maybe someone else would.
Maybe nothing's wrong and I've spent too much time listening to it, I don't know

This is the beginning of a track and there is no processing at all on the master

Here's the link :

https://www.mediafire.com/?io1kegnbp815sc3

No matter who you are, your opinion will be useful

Thanks