Metal Song Parodies

Ok, I'm working on a PMIB one... it's pretty much done I just need a bit of help with the lyrics, they need a bit of improvment :p any one want to help?
 
I've done the lyrics,but a few liens could be funnier... and kattana has helped make a few funny pics :lol: that's it. So anyone who wants to come on MSN and help out with the lyrics or graphics, be my guest.