Metal with a tiny bit synth

[osum]

Hi there,

since a few months I'm trying to get some knowledge in mixing, so this is one of my first more or less serious attempts:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/32193848/new-01-03.mp3

Pls rate & rip to pieces

 

[osum]

Any suggestions?

 

[AceFireForce117]

Come on guys, what the hell ?...

I love that guitar sound, i'm quite new to all of this so i'm afraid i can't really point to you what's wrong but i think the snare isn't shining at some moments

I have a question though, even if we don't have keyboards in my band there is this one chorus in a song where there is. Just a tiny bit, like yours ! I've searched and i can't find any tips on how to get a fairly correct sound or at least not do anything wrong.
I'm not looking for a go-to chain, but like, how should i pan them ? (there's 2 synth with one guitar at the back playing the same melody as one of the synths) What freq isn't used by keyboards ? etc.