metalcore mix - need your inputs

[marios.blythe]

hello guys. 4 months ago my bands mates record di's for the song ''architect'' by miss may i..the playing was horible i can't edit that mess..i try to mix is as well as i can here is the results:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/xcfq54hz32uz0z1/newmix57ari 2+master.mp3

tell me your opinions..i don't add the vocals and i did not make a solid mastering yet..also i am thinking that the cymbals need to be changed+the kick is a little clicky? whats your opinion? thanks in advance