Mix critique for a school project?

[mstone564]

Sup guys, I recorded/mixed a Volumes-esque song one of my good friends arranged for an English project on Frankenstein (I think?).

Nothing too serious, but I would love some critique on the mix to blow his classmates away. =D

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/MP3's/School Song Dos - FINAL 3.mp3

 

[mstone564]

Buuump. Even just a little crit would help!

 

[tomrip]

Now i am not a pro, but it seems bass is a little loud, and guitars should come up a bit. it also seems the entire mix could come up a bit. The vocals seem like you nailed it there. with that style of music. love the bass drum sound. i think project all in all is good

 

[DesireX]

Pretty good mix overall. But I personally feel that the lead guitar is covering the vocals a little. Bass could come out a little more too.

 

[mstone564]

Lol, two different opinions on bass being too loud and quiet, and IMO it sounds right
Vocalist liked the level of the leads so that should be good. Rhythms could possibly be brought up more.

tomrip, you said the entire mix could be louder? I mastered it pretty hot so it should be at a decent commercial level haha.
Thanks for the comments though! Really appreciate it =D