Recorded/mixed/mastered an English project for a friend

[mstone564]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/School Song M2.mp3

How's it sounding?
I want lotsss of crit on getting things to sit nicely or if something is just totally off.

EDIT: Oh, and if anyone's like wut about this being an English project he was suppose to get a message across or something and choose to do it in song.

 

[Sam Bottner]

sounds pretty cool man nice work. maybe some tuning on the clean vocals though haha

 

[mstone564]

I tuned the reeeally noticeable vocals that were held out. Where else needs tuned?

I added a little of the almost non-existing bass freqs that I left out: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/School Song M3.mp3

 

[mstone564]

...Anybody else?

 

[Charlez]

If there are more than 1 take of that gang vocal part at the beginning, you should pan them. And yeah, the clean vocals still seem to be out of tune.

 

[mstone564]

Woops, def forgot to pan those gang vocals, and yeah I know the vocals are still out of tune. I hate having to tune vocals.

I'm assuming everything's sitting in the mix okay?

 

[mstone564]

I need to have this done by tonight, and this is what I have for the final version.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/School Song M7.mp3

Should I change anything before I send it?