Mix in hebrew for a movie clip, fresh ears needed!

[aviel]

Holla!
just something local i've been doing for a video clip, i need fresh ears.
i think i am missing something, but not sure though!

any comment is welcomed as always.

http://min.us/mZRdOgVZd


EDIT: is there any way to posy links to minus so you can hear on the board itself??

 

[aviel]

common i have to post some porn here to get views?

 

[JakeAC5253]

The vocals need to sit down, because right now they are standing up. The rhythm section needs to be better mixed, there is no cohesion between the drums, guitar, and bass yet. Try and get that sorted out before adding the vocals.