Mixing Help

[MightyYi]

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/6010620/Project 2 Rough v1.4.1.mp3

This is my first real mix. Please tell me what you think!

I was afraid to post here for the longest time because, well, the mixes done here are really good. Hopefully I don't offend anyone or something, lol.

Thanks.