Mixoff Contest (The One) Opinions on my Mix?

[Fugdup]

This is the song used for the contest over at Mixoff, where Ermz was the judge.

This is the biggest mix i've ever done. I believe it was around 50 tracks total.
I did this after the mixoff contest was over, but that's cool, this is a nice track to practice with.
I've learned alot while mixing this.

I would appreciate comments on the mix. What would you change/do to improve it?
I think i Linkin Parkified the chorus a bit, with the phone effect in the background



Follow this link for raw tracks.
http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/andy-sneap/782667-memnoir-mix-contest-mixoff-org.html

 

[ShipwreckSoundWorks]

Sounds sick man! Really digging it. The only problem I hear is in the beginning right before the bass guitar does that sick little riff. It sounds like your sub/low end is a bit out of control. It just sounds muddy, and it conflicts with some of the drum pieces. This sounds like a massively professional mix though man! You don't have that low end issue in anywhere else in the song. Really sick job, I'm very impressed! How, if I may ask, did you get the vocals to be wide in the mix? That's personally something I would not do to a whole mix, but maybe parts to add to the impact.