Modern Metal/Electronica/Fagcore

[Damian B]

I was listening to "I See Stars" earlier today and they inspired me to write a tune with electronic elements, autotuned vocals, etc.

Here's the first minute or so:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/260611/fagcore3.mp3

How's the mix?

edit: new mix and more of the song
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/260611/fagcore4.mp3

 

[updog]

Guitars sound great, but I don't think the electronic elements are obvious enough. I didn't even notice them until I remembered there were supposed to be electronic elements. Also, there was no autotuned vocals like you said

 

[Pedro Teixeira]

This has nothing about fagcore, it actually sounds cool..... YOU PROMISED FAGCORE AND ATUNED VOX :'(

 

[Nauru]

The drums could come up, but other than that it sounds good!

 

[Damian B]

I've added quite a bit to the song, and mixed some elements differently:
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/260611/fagcore4.mp3

Sorry about the confusion on the vocals - they will be added eventually.

Other feedback would be awesome - thanks

 

[Damian B]

bbbump

 

[Ionei]

Needs more breakdown.
Needs more hectic(those minor second chords, I'm sure they have a name I'm forgetting) chords.

Also more arpeggiator.

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

Tone is much to large for fagcore.

 

[MarcusGHedwig]

Can't really judge the mix as I'm listening on headphones in my school's library, but sounds good man, and I actually dig the music (even the breakdown, because, god fucking forbid, it actually stayed in the same tempo and the song transitioned into it smoothly and naturally, rather than a wrenchingly abrupt and painfully forced tempo change breakdown that is so definitive of the style)

However, I do have to say that the final progression (that only comes in twice at the very end) is a bit too cliche; I know it's a variation on the main one, but IMO the main works better