My Final Prayer - New Song First Draft

[jauernis]

This is a first draft and please pick it apart...a lil softcore compared to most of the music on here but need help on the mix. The guitars are reamped by guitarhack on a krank. Thanks guitarhack!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=797206&songID=6519417

 

[kass]

badass to me

like the song too

 

[GuitarHack]

The Vox and Bass need to go down a bit and the guitars need to come up (biased ). Sorry, I forgot all about this song and I owe you some Wagner settings for the first sample (impulse used on the samples was "thisone.wav" that was floating around):



NOTE: Might be boobies on the image page, maybe NSFW.

I like the overall feel of the song.

 

[obscura1560]

I agree with GuitarHack, bass is too loud, guitars should be louder, but the vocals are fine...and I love the voice too

 

[DrGleason]

I would make the bass more low end heavy. I think that would thicken the mix a bit more. Also, I think it's weird that he says he wants to pray in a song with F-bombs; seems a little... interesting!!! lol

 

[jauernis]

lol thats one thing we're still trying to figure out...lyrics! thanks for the suggestions everyone