My first full song

Jun 26, 2009
1,970
41
48
New Jersey
Well ive been recording for about 4 months now and i finally recorded a full song i wrote. The tone is not great but its not too bad. Its revalver MKIII. Lemme know what you think of the song and mix. Also for the intro with the distortion, what can i do to make the guitars now so buried (i think thats the term i would use) in the mix? Thanks.