My first thrash song

[Sloan]

Working on a potential thrash project with some friends, kinda passing ideas back and forth via INTERNET.

Since this is the absolute first ever thrash kind of thing I've ever done, I would like some feedback on the overall song, NOT THE TONE.

I like it, but since I have never played any type of metal related genre ever, I am interested in hearing feedback from those more experienced in this realm.



https://dl.dropbox.com/u/17514020/SloanZone/Audio/ThrashLab2013/ThrashLab_SloanRiff001.mp3


Thanks for checking it out.

 

[DanLights]

wow, loud hahahaha really abrasive guitar tone, it's hard to understand what it's doing because it makes my ears bleed a bit hahaha

after lowering the volume, I like the first riff, the second not so much, sounds like a jumpy circus theme, the third as well but that one's a bit more passable. Still, not bad at all, the rest is pretty cool and definitely a thrash band I would enjoy

 

[Sloan]

Thanks for checking it out. I have a sinus infection right now so I can't really hear any high end, hence the nasty tone.