My metalcore mix (feedback please)

Feb 15, 2014
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Ok so I'm still a noob guy trying to just make music in his bedroom. This is a pretty simple song, nothing fancy just fun to play.
I don't have studio monitors which is unfortunate but I still like to make music.

Here is the mix. You can give me feedback on anything. Even just how the song is structured and if you like it or not. Anything helps.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ELhPZvSRq4