My very first mix and threat on this forum

[Lakter666]

Hey guys,

I'm new here and this is my very first post.

I was mixing Cnoc At Tursas Banncockburn for practice.
This is basicaly my third serious mix ever.

Can you please give me some feedback.

Mix:
www.dropbox.com/s/2bqopxw5faowra7/Bancockburn_Mix.mp3?dl=0

Master:
www.dropbox.com/s/t0i0vhnfkt2605a/Bancockburn_Master.mp3?dl=0

If you want to mix this song yourself
here is the link to the files:
http://www.cambridge-mt.com/ms-mtk.htm#CnocAnTursa

 

[Flow Of Time]

Who are you threatening?

Jokes aside, very good for a first mix imo. Still some stuff that needs to be fixed, but totally listenable.
Keep it going!

 

[alex-sonic]

Need work on your kick it's barely audible
The snare got the machine gun effect
Guitars are good for a first mix!

 

[Lakter666]

Thank you guys

Yes the Snare got this Machine-Gun effect now, the kick was overpresent when I raised it up and I felt that it was killing the mix. gonna experiment with it a bit more...
Funnywise I'm not that satisfied with the guitars.

I've done a mix before with more dynamic drums, what sounded more like black metal production a la wolves in the throne room and actualy fittet it a bit better imo
https://www.dropbox.com/s/skedr152e3m3nov/Cnoc An Tursa - Bannockburn_Master.mp3?dl=0

And if you got Time and Motivation, can you please tell me on which topic I need to work especially? (what to be fixes in the first place)