Need help with ballad...

[Ola Englund]

First time I ever did a ballad with only acoustic guitars and vocals... I'm afraid I would overdo it with effects and extras I don't know where to stop.
What can I do to improve the song and what should I add to make it "magical". I feel like a blind man without his stick...

http://www.feared.se/audio/20-2.mp3

 

[smy1]

Sounds good, I wouldn't change anything - except for the singer. He gives me the feeling that he is yawning while singing and conveys no feeling at all. The higher background harmonies could be much louder, too

 

[AudioPhile777]

+1 on the sleepy singer...