Need opinion : Rose of sharyn jeff DI with my backing track

[delayshifter]

this http://dl.dropbox.com/u/23200398/FINISH.mp3

for backing track I create it with my drum samples and bass is broomstick bass jazzbass..

any advice would really help
thanks

*big thanks to jeff for this

 

[delayshifter]

bump for comment. lol