Need opinions & help!

[stephensonnn2]

Just mixed my bands new song just wondered what people thought of the production as a whole - where i've gone wrong, what needs changing etc.
Bash all you want im just looking to see what i need to improve on and what i need to listen out for in future mixes.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/31430677/Rumours - Ashes.mp3

thanks for anyone that replies on this thread