I've been working on this song for quite a while now. It's the opening track of my band first album and I will use it as a template for the rest of the songs. I could really use some fresh ears.
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/316805/realesc/afraildeception/LosingS11.mp3
https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/316805/realesc/afraildeception/LosingS11.mp3