Need Some Vocal Recording Guidance (Death Metal)

anibawl

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Feb 5, 2011
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I seem to be having a very hard time with this song we are recording. The vocal part just irks the shit out of me, but I'm not sure why. I might be self conscious, or I'm just burnt out from recording guitars, and drums, and listening to this a hundred times. Another thing is I didn't write the lyrics, the drummer did, so I have to move some stuff around and try to make the lyrics have some kind of melody.

Anywho... what do you guys think about this recording so far?

Vocal wise I would like input on:

Technique, melody, legibility of pronounciations, and anything ANYTHING that will help me.

http://soundcloud.com/totbsg/vocalclipmp3

Don't be afraid to tell me I'm a horrible vocalist either :worship: