Need to tighten up??

[Pablo333]

Hi was wondering on how much more tighter these riffs should be -

i just recorded them tonight so havent had much time to practice them

neverriffs

Think they would sound good as a completed arrangement??

theres no bass - just a quick mix - trying to pull together some riffs for some new tunez!!!!


cheers

 

[Audiosprite]

404'd

 

[Pablo333]

neverriffs

fixed, sorry mate

 

[Audiosprite]

in the riff at :26-:42 you're anticipating the offbeats a lot, so rerecord those. everything else is great, love the riffs too

 

[Pablo333]

hey thanks man!!

 

[Pablo333]

Updated mix with bass and re-recorded guitars

Neverriffs