Need your opinion on my mastering - black metal

[Vulcain]

Hails,

I'm trying to make a "quick and easy" mastering of my mix just to send it to some labels, after which we'll make it mastered by a professional mastering engineer.

Can you guys give me you opinions/advices on it?

Mix
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/11383191/Ordalie 1 mix.mp3

Master
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/11383191/Ordalie 1 master2.mp3

Thanks