Nerve End test mix. Give me some CC!

[AricMoirae]

Hey guys. So i have been lurking this forum for about 2 weeks trying to learn as much as I can. And with whatever knowledge i have accumulated so far, I took a shot a mixing that Nerve End song that was posted here a while ago. I don't have monitors Just yet, so I am mixing on these very dishonest computer speakers. I think it sounds ok... But i also Know that it's probably way to early in the game for me to be trusting my ears. lol So I'm looking for some feedback and suggestions for improvement. Be as harsh as you want.

I used superior Drummer, Nick crows 8505 for the guitars, and the Tse B.O.D on bass.

http://soundcloud.com/thearic/nerve4

Cheers.