New song lyrics! (no warrel dane copy this time)

[SeedAwakeningMachine]

STAINS OF LUNACY

I am the theatre
Of mental tragedy
I keep the sources deep inside
Of pure insanity
My visitors are afraid
Of the feeling of fear
But I know that their mind
Wont make it disappear

Within my walls, resides the realm of panic
Blood stained handprints decorate my walls
Downward spiralling into illness,
The screams echo eternally in my halls

STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!
STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!
STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!
STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!

Their curtain has fallen
Their suffer has no end
Psychotic metamorphosis
Their minds twist and bend
Inhuman cures for insanity
I told them to beware
But it is too late for them
In their empty eyes I’ve stared

Within my walls, resides the realm of panic
Blood stained handprints decorate my walls
Downward spiralling into illness,
The screams echo eternally in my halls

STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!
STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!
STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!
STAINS OF LUNACY!!!!

 

[deathstrike from hell]

still very warrelesque.

stay away from the following words:

lunacy
tragedy
theater
enemies
reality
dreaming
dead
dying
re-dead

and replace those with:

rainbows
bubblegum
being awake
being alive
happy

 

[WhiteBeastofWotan]

Wow gay.

 

[reese_apoc]

still very warrelesque.

stay away from the following words:

lunacy
tragedy
theater
enemies
reality
dreaming
dead
dying
re-dead

and replace those with:

rainbows
bubblegum
being awake
being alive
happy

better yet... just... no more... just stop.

 

[El Stormo]

"My visitors are afraid
Of the feeling of fear"

-> That's definitely no good - change it.

And the halls-walls rhyme is also phail.