Is it just me or does that 40 second intro get a bit boring, also the fact that it loops odd number of cycles (9) is bit annoying, maybe shorten it to 20-25 secs or so? I would want to hear additional rhythm guitars for some wall of sound near 1:27-1:40. I don't kinda dig the guitar part at 0:41-0:15, its just so overused. and less snap on the kick and more bass guitar.
And plz, don't drive the master bus so hard against the limiter. Its really annoying to hear constant distortion. You can add the volume later on.
) Let's see; first, the kick is too loud, and possibly too clicky (though if it were brought down in volume it'd probably be alright), which is very distracting. Music is pretty cool; I really like the synths and the atmosphere they create (what program(s) did you use?), though while this is a cool example of it, the whole "play the same lick repeatedly while changing the chords under it" thing has gotten a little old for me. The dissonance/chromaticism of the next riff is a bit jarringly out of place right after such a melodic part IMO, though I know KSE does it a lot (e.g. End of Heartache prechorus, My Curse), so I can see why you'd dig it 
Sweet guitar harmony btw, and good vibrato! (a very underappreciated but essential technique IMO) Guitars are a bit thin sounding (and digital) but good otherwise, and if there's a bass track in here, I'm having a hard time hearing it!
