im no expert by any means but, i couldnt hear the bass guitar , i knew there was one there, i could hear the transients at points but no real 'body' also thought the vocals needed to be brought up ever so slightly,
the kick tended to over power the snare when it was double kicking too, there also seems to be very very low muted picking i think that kicks in the left channel at 3:19 and at the same section earlier in the song, or maybe my ears suck,
thats my two cents im sure aother people will be able to give you better advice