Newest mix, maybe my best? Please critique!

[Laneismusic]

I think this is my best mix. But i'll leave it to you to decide whether or not it's even good. I've been recording for like one year, it's so legit. haha. I know that It's not the age that matters, it's the knowledge and experiance (which could come from age I suppose). But how does this sound for mid-teens? I'm the only person my age that I know records, and wants to learn more and more about it.

Anyways. so off topic i guess.
Just lemme know what you think!

-"how do sidechain compress?"
https://dl.dropbox.com/u/6418015/Instruments%20only.mp3

 

[darthjujuu]

too much low end in the bass, bring guitar faders down, you should work on your monitoring situation you can monitor bass better. for years everyone told me how important room treatment is and i continuously ignored it until now and you can't possibly imagine how much itt'l improve your mixes. make that #1 priority, for both your live room and mix room.