Not the usual type of music on this forum. Opinions?

[abaga129]

I got a little inspired yesterday and after several hours of frustration I came up with something that I felt I could work with. This song is a very ambient genre-less thing that I came up with. I kinda want some opinions about it as far as songwriting and creativity go and mix critiques. I've heard it so many times now that its starting to get difficult to tell what sounds good and what doesnt. Thanks

Link: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/56167527/First Real Mix.mp3

Im not sure if I'll keep adding to it or not

 

[alternateadrian]

I actually enjoyed listening to this and the mix was solid. Thanks for this!