Opinion on new track

[Awake_In_Animosity]

Hi Guys

I recorded a new track on the weekend, it is rough so go easy on me.

I am really after feedback on the song/music itself, there has been no production done to it and no vocals, also ignore the guitar solo(it was put there as a rough guide for further recordings).

Vocal suggestions would also be aprreciated :Spin:

http://www.mp3.com.au/artist.asp?id=23545

Cheers

Goredo

 

[DIOBOLIC5150]

not working

 

[Awake_In_Animosity]

Sorry dudes, I will post when its running again.

 

[Awake_In_Animosity]

Try this: http://www.mp3.com.au/AwakeinAnimosity/

Its still not working due to it being a new account. But I will let you know when to go there.

 

[Awake_In_Animosity]

All right we are up and running nowm let me know what you think.

 

[Awake_In_Animosity]

*Bump* For those who missed it.

 

[Awake_In_Animosity]

Come on guys, its not that bad!

 

[Genius Gone Insane]

IMHO guitars sound good...?...songwriting 2 cents: I would axe the double bass on the main riff and play that fucker faster, like almost 2x as fast...it's kind of Megadeth the world needs a hero sounding, like it should be played faster. My opinion, that's what I would do. I know that if you played it like 200 bpm I'd enjoy it a lot more.

 

[DIOBOLIC5150]

Try to play to a click. There's alot of timing issues in this one. Turn the cymbals down too. I would try to change the riffs sooner too. It gets boring kinda fast. The guitars sound ok to me but, I would use more obviously different tones for left and right channels. Nice job though.

 

[Awake_In_Animosity]

Yeah, as I said its rough idea, I was mainly wondering if youo guys thought that sound or style of music was worth going through with?

I think it shoould be faster too...I aiming for an Arch Enemy type sound, interesting megadeth comparison...been listening to them for ages, but a lot more recently since they recently toured here in sydney

Thanks guys

 

[DIOBOLIC5150]

Ok, well then speed it up, make the guitars heavier, turn down the cymbals and play to a click...and viola....metal.

 

[Awake_In_Animosity]

On a rather funny note, this track is now number 7 on the "unknown" charts at mp3.com.au ahahaha