Please Help Me - only 13 seconds

[domingooo]

Hi, I've recorded 13 second trying to emulate Ola's sound. (because i really like his sound)

what do you think about the way the instruments blend together? how can i improve the snare? is the bass to high?

Please please comment, teach me. I really want to improve myself ( i know it sucks rigth now, sounds muddy and lifeless to me)




thank you!!

 

[Ola Englund]

It's not that bad bro. My best tip for you my friend is to lower the gain and whack the shit out of those strings.

 

[domingooo]

HEy!!! Thanks a Lot Ola!!! I'll do that rigth now!!

 

[domingooo]

ok, here i ago.
new attemp, i'm much more happier wit it now, what do you guys think about it??