please judge my half-finished demo

[Brett]

no guitar involved, although I sample guitar. It's a mix of industrial, metal and hip-hop(i think?)

http://media.putfile.com/demo1-10

I made this during the long hours I was sick at home with mono. I was depressed(mono does that), tired, agitated and the only thing to help was to jam on the computer, so I wrote this.

Thing is, when I went back to work, I stopped writing on it. I also believe it's not that good, although I hear that people writing music can be overly hard on themselves, which is why i'm asking for your opinions.

Just wondering if I should finish it or scrap it to the dumps from wince thy came.

 

[Will Bozarth]

listening

 

[Will Bozarth]

as closed-minded as I am, I thought that was pretty cool. reminded me of something that could go on Antimatter's Lights Out CD. finish the song, throw some alternating male/female clean vox over that, and it would be damn cool

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

I liked it, no problems here.

 

[Brett]

Damn guys, thanks.

I'll get around to finishing it. Maybe take out the guitar part unless I can find a way to tie it into the vibe.

 

[Cephalopod]

I'll remember to check this out after work.

EDIT: Listened, and enjoyed. I like how the track changes pace in the middle. Finish it!