Please Listen - need help!

[Niels]

Please listen to this track(the one on the top):

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=494490

I worked on this track for some days now, but I cannot get it right:

If I take the volume of the synth back, they get lost in the mastering - same with guitars. Any EQ suggestions? Any other solutions?

The drums seem to be wrong too...


I'm deaf!!!:zombie:

Thx for your help!

Niels

 

[KeithRT99]

sounds good to me. i think there needs to be more low end though.

 

[Niels]

Low end in general, or only for certain instruments?

 

[reneisgod]

I think the track sounds pritty good man, there a bit clipping going on at parts,
id take down the bass and add more bottom end, the guitars need some work eq wise id maybe try eq matching them to a commercial track.

just curious what did u use for drums id guess dfh ?

 

[Niels]

I think the track sounds pritty good man, there a bit clipping going on at parts,
id take down the bass and add more bottom end, the guitars need some work eq wise id maybe try eq matching them to a commercial track.

just curious what did u use for drums id guess dfh ?

Yeah I know, the clipping comes mainly from the Bass track, need to re-record it I think.

I played around with differnt EQ settings for the gits, couldn't get it right. ... will try it again...!

Drums are BFD, with a little bit of Andys Kick.

 

[Niels]

So I loaded up a remixed version, please have a second look at:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=494490

The guitars don't sound that raw anymore, but have lost a bit of their definition. The Snare gets lost in some passages, i'll fix it. Maybe mastering is a bit to heavy...

What do you think? Better?